Before reading, in this post there are might be mistakes because I finished this but it failed up comment and I lost my 20 minutes of life for nothing, another 25 minutes of redo in total 45 minutes!=.= Now I'm awfully tired, sleepy, surrounded by mosquitos, and stressed. Because of those, I could be less critical. So just saying... accept it :)
Contents are good but I heard or saw it in some other advertisement before. Vocabulary is right chosen. Many effects had been add in and those increase the quality of the podcast. Kept focus of the subject and have a conclusion.
By listening to this, I predict; this is not the first act, recording. Effective the action part is great, I kept my attention from start to the end. All grammar are correct or I didn't spot any.
Transition are good, no blank gaps or unneeded noise. I don't think that the music is right. The song gives me a happy, joyful, peaceful, positive mood but the bully gives me a bad, negative, hate feelings. So I think you need to change that because it doesn't make the podcast better, it's too small so it doesn't change much.(unless you turn your speaker to MAX volume). The podcast length is too long, the conclusion I just skip it.
My recommendation is change the background song. In the end after the action is over (more specific is 1:09 you better to put something like 'BAM!!!' to catch the peoples attention back or make it say quicker, also you could just make it shorter other wise they just ignore it
The content was good. It provide us the details about the product's content which is really good and that really help a lot in persuading. The structure and the plot was good too, i can tell what happen from the start to the end. The pronunciation was excellent. The sound quality was great. Even though she whisper the lines but i still can hear it clearly. I could listen from start to end with out playing it again. You did a every good job on using sound effect. It helps me visualize the commercial much easier. The music was good too but some part of the commercial there are empty spaces, they didn't effect much but try avoid that mistake next time. For me, i found this commercial very interesting and catchy. I didn't lose my attention during listening to it. It was great. To improve this i think you should be careful with editing and you could make it more original with the idea that you have.
I think the it wasd smooth and easy to understand. The music and sound effect is okay. It's attract people by the music. The idea is good. It make the commercial better. As i see, this commercial is interesting. I think you should change the content a little bit. It's not really good with your commercial. Any way, i love it
Ahaha, I love your commerial alot, especially with the punching noise. The music doesn't distract and your voice is clear and easy to hear. Great job. But I quite get the beginning a little bit but I catch up to it later on :D
Before reading, in this post there are might be mistakes because I finished this but it failed up comment and I lost my 20 minutes of life for nothing, another 25 minutes of redo in total 45 minutes!=.= Now I'm awfully tired, sleepy, surrounded by mosquitos, and stressed. Because of those, I could be less critical. So just saying... accept it :)
ReplyDeleteContents are good but I heard or saw it in some other advertisement before. Vocabulary is right chosen. Many effects had been add in and those increase the quality of the podcast. Kept focus of the subject and have a conclusion.
By listening to this, I predict; this is not the first act, recording. Effective the action part is great, I kept my attention from start to the end. All grammar are correct or I didn't spot any.
Transition are good, no blank gaps or unneeded noise. I don't think that the music is right. The song gives me a happy, joyful, peaceful, positive mood but the bully gives me a bad, negative, hate feelings. So I think you need to change that because it doesn't make the podcast better, it's too small so it doesn't change much.(unless you turn your speaker to MAX volume). The podcast length is too long, the conclusion I just skip it.
My recommendation is change the background song. In the end after the action is over (more specific is 1:09 you better to put something like 'BAM!!!' to catch the peoples attention back or make it say quicker, also you could just make it shorter other wise they just ignore it
The content was good. It provide us the details about the product's content which is really good and that really help a lot in persuading.
ReplyDeleteThe structure and the plot was good too, i can tell what happen from the start to the end. The pronunciation was excellent.
The sound quality was great. Even though she whisper the lines but i still can hear it clearly. I could listen from start to end with out playing it again.
You did a every good job on using sound effect. It helps me visualize the commercial much easier. The music was good too but some part of the commercial there are empty spaces, they didn't effect much but try avoid that mistake next time.
For me, i found this commercial very interesting and catchy. I didn't lose my attention during listening to it. It was great.
To improve this i think you should be careful with editing and you could make it more original with the idea that you have.
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ReplyDeleteI think the it wasd smooth and easy to understand. The music and sound effect is okay.
ReplyDeleteIt's attract people by the music. The idea is good. It make the commercial better. As i see, this commercial is interesting.
I think you should change the content a little bit. It's not really good with your commercial. Any way, i love it
Ahaha, I love your commerial alot, especially with the punching noise. The music doesn't distract and your voice is clear and easy to hear.
ReplyDeleteGreat job. But I quite get the beginning a little bit but I catch up to it later on :D